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SimonDP
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Registered: October 2004
Location: Centurion RSA
Posts: 16,816
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Sharp enough, pose is good, like the perch. Why the comp so heavy on the left - working to rule of thirds isn't always the best idea, bird is looking back towards the camera, so space on RH side is wasted. I would consider an off-centre placement to the left, ie about 1/2 the width of the bird deeper into the frame as it is now.
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Simon Du Plessis
www.actionimage.co.za simondp@actionimage.co.za
(I'll keep on shooting, and one of these days I'll get it right!)
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Callie Muller
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Registered: September 2011
Location: Pretoria
Posts: 381
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Thank you. I actually cropped quite a lot on the left. Is there a way to replace the photo with one composed as you suggested ?
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Your first 10,000 photographs are your worst. – Henri Cartier-Bresson
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SimonDP
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Registered: October 2004
Location: Centurion RSA
Posts: 16,816
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You can either re-upload (recommended) an edited version, or you can replace this one with the edit photo command, but then sometimes this version will show in the browser until you cache decides to update the file with a newer version. Personally I feel that for the sake of learning process, its best to do another upload so that members can compare the differences vs the comments made, like daddy2610 did with his Fruits from heaven upload.
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Simon Du Plessis
www.actionimage.co.za simondp@actionimage.co.za
(I'll keep on shooting, and one of these days I'll get it right!)
Contact me for training in Beginners or Advanced Sport & Action photography
Please e-mail or PM me should you wish to have my comments on a specific image, or to comment/ask questions on my crits)
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Miss Anna
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Location: Fochville
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