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SimonDP
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Registered: October 2004
Location: Centurion RSA
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Good try, seems sharp enough, simplistic in composition. I would have the vulture more to right in the frame as he is looking to the left and currently too much out of the frame. Also consider a portrait orientation with the vulture in top thirds placement. Lighting a little directional leaving the LH side of the bird in shadow, but handled OK for starters. Keep at it.
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