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SimonDP
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Experience Level: Unranked
Registered: October 2004
Location: Centurion RSA
Posts: 11,055
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Dianne, not too bad, sharp enough and exposure is good, no blown whites etc. I think a little more planning required - kayak too high up in the frame, the white rapids flow on the bottom half will still have enough effect even when reduced by a third, also more space on the top edge will leave you with room for oars in the upright position, less cramped composition. Don't know the conditions/location, but a more frontal approach could also be more dramatic.
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Dianne
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Experience Level: Intermediate
Registered: November 2006
Location: Westville, Durban
Posts: 10,315
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Thanks Simon for taking the time to look and comment - your advise is sooooo appreciated.  This was just a candid shot as I was taking pics of the wall at Midmar and these 2 guys came down with their kayaks. Wrong lens on so was quite limiting. - done with the kit lens 18-55.
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Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow - Ronald E. Osborn
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